Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 505 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Negativity


How soon
the evening falls.
The walls close in
and confines the night.

Caught in
negative memory,
I cringe at those
intrusions,
bursts of miserable
tasks that the brain
installs
without permission -
an unlit path
of coincidence and conflict,
a fight of tensions
and unspeakable sorrow.

Tomorrow is
a long time
coming.

Submitted: Monday, November 11, 2013
Edited: Friday, November 22, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 4,069 Points Hazel Durham (12/10/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    Brilliant write, as the darkness unfolds our mind can wander to negative thoughts of the past holding us back in it's tight grip that has no mercy, as the morning seems a lifetime away. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 652 Points Paul Brookes (12/10/2013 2:19:00 AM)

    A great poem. I too have long nights when morning seems just out of reach so rang a bell.10/10 Thanks for sharing BB: O) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (12/3/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    agree with Joseph..
    there is always hope tomorrow and and our task is to make sure that tomorrow will be better than today
    very interesting write
    good poem of course (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Joseph Anderson (11/30/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    Let us hope that some tomorrows will be better then some todays. A vey deep and serious write,
    made me think and wonder (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,463 Points * Sunprincess * (11/22/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    interesting and I really enjoyed...our brains are really fascinating and I would think one of the most spectacular creations God has ever made...not just our brain but also the brain of the animals.. this is a really nice...
    please keep penning :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,062 Points Valerie Dohren (11/21/2013 4:36:00 PM)

    But tomorrow will come Sally, for me too I hope. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

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