Negativity Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Negativity

Rating: 5.0


How soon
the evening falls.
The walls close in
and confines the night.

Caught in
negative memory,
I cringe at those
intrusions,
bursts of miserable
tasks that the brain
installs
without permission -
an unlit path
of coincidence and conflict,
a fight of tensions
and unspeakable sorrow.

Tomorrow is
a long time
coming.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 10 December 2013

Brilliant write, as the darkness unfolds our mind can wander to negative thoughts of the past holding us back in it's tight grip that has no mercy, as the morning seems a lifetime away.

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Paul Brookes 10 December 2013

A great poem. I too have long nights when morning seems just out of reach so rang a bell.10/10 Thanks for sharing BB: O)

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 December 2013

agree with Joseph.. there is always hope tomorrow and and our task is to make sure that tomorrow will be better than today very interesting write good poem of course

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

Let us hope that some tomorrows will be better then some todays. A vey deep and serious write, made me think and wonder

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Valerie Dohren 21 November 2013

But tomorrow will come Sally, for me too I hope. Excellent write.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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