Treasure Island

Helena Alvarez


Neglected


All alone
Shadows, casting its way around me
Silence, taking my breath away
Helpless, I cannot speak
Torture, without you im weak
You've forgotten about me
I guess that's how it'll be
Even if you promised me eternity

Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2009

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  • Sonia Irizarry (9/18/2009 8:53:00 PM)

    neglected, I really feel U girl, , ,
    I had felt like that or actually was Neglected by someone i never expected,
    but I Luv her in a silence all alone, I really Wish She don't ever feel Neglected from me, I do Wish 4U 2take a Step Forward.; } Don't feel Helpless, , , , don't FeaR Ever. (Report) Reply

  • Danny H (9/18/2009 5:51:00 PM)

    : (
    So sad
    yet an amazing poem
    you have quite a talent for poetry :) (Report) Reply

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