When
You have given your all
To the ones you love
Put first their wants
Stayed for them
Hugs
Smiles
Love
You've given them all
Now
They have let go
Life's opportunities are open
They've closed the door
The force was stronger
So
Just wait
Leave the door open
Just HOPE
.....
Never give up on those
Those who gave you everything
Copyright Reserved January 26th 2016
Lyn Paul
An inspirational poem with positive approach to life by hoping for the best in even despairing situations. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
The force was stronger! But, hope lies ahead. Nice piece of work.
Patience to stay is a key of everything. I enjoyed with it. Thank you for sharing.
Hope is the last thing you should lose. It's what was left in Pandora's box when all the ills for the world escaped. Hope is precisely what you never give up, as this poem so well expresses and the wise Greek mythology knew. You are a gifted poet with a gifted heart.
A difficult decision. You have poured your heart, your life, your essence into someone and they quit. No need to stop caring, but when do you need to let go for your own good and give that love to others who deserve it?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In love everything is pleasing and life's opportunities open in such case. This is very interesting poem shared on really.10