New Friend Poem by Asia Robinson

New Friend



She was sad and need help
someone who was sitting under the tree
She stood up her eyes where red
I asked why she did not reply
I could see the signs of abuse
She went day and day and made excuses
All i could say is I'll be your NEW FRIEND

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asia Joseph 19 August 2008

I like it very much, to the other comment, just brush it off, poets are human as well and can very well make mistakes! ! ! ! good work, pls comment

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Ivor Hogg 08 February 2008

You can say much in a few words but you let yourself down with your presentation A spell check before you post would improve you pressntation immensely ples a re edit needed help woud be more correct Her eyes were red no where red. I assume you prefer honesty to false praise ivor

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Asia Robinson

Asia Robinson

St. Louis, Missiouri
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