New Life Poem by Nosheen Irfan

New Life

Rating: 4.7


Yellow leaves fell
Leaving the old boughs
Tired of clinging
But afraid of letting go
Unresisting to the shift
From warmth to cold
They had no choice
But to swing to Nature's whims.

In their place, new leaves grew
From the soft touch of spring
And gave the tree a new life
And one day man came
And slashed the tree to the ground
Not caring a bit
That new leaves meant new life
For the poor old tree.

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: change,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 23 December 2015

Change is natural. Old has to die to give space to new. Very nice.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 August 2022

It gives me enormous pleasure to revisit this excellent poem.. beautiful poetry.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 May 2019

A beautiful poem! I consider the last couple of lines as the epitome of this wonderful work on new life..........10

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Daniel Brick 15 June 2017

The second stanza is a lament for the victim of human cruelty, and its a sorry kind of casual destructiveness. There is no sign the human realizes his actions are so hurtful. The stanza begins with nature's hope but that is dashed by man's slashing. // But the first stanza is wonderful in evoking the necessary pruning of autumn. It's the self-renewing process of nature you're describing, and although you don't put a human being in the setting, I can see my life paralleling the tree's life, and the tree and I are siblings in the larger family of life.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2016

new leaves meant new life For the poor old tree................. A great write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

Changes are part of life. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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