New Love Poem by jack frost

New Love

Rating: 4.7


When first he came to see her 'twas' with a timid heart.and even when the lights were low they sat

this__________________________far apart

But as their love grew warmer and they learned the joy of a kiss
they knocked out all the spaces

Andtheysatascloseasthis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

Spaced out became closed-fused in…well done with: he---------she Next Heshe! LOL! ! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Goran Gustafsson 03 May 2009

Right on the spot, enhanced by a graphic presentation!

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Tai Chi Italy 19 October 2008

Awww sweet! there is nothing like snuggling up JF! well done for making me smile on a wet sunday morning in Tai's land,

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