New Moon Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

New Moon

Rating: 5.0


The moon, half dead,
gave an eerie glow,
consoled by clouds,
she laid with motions slow;
poisoned by her pain,
she looked down at me
buried her soul in her head,
covered by clouds' canopy-
only to rise again;
to rise when the sun rises,
to set when the sun sets.
To be close to the sun's glare,
she crossed the sky with her.
to be seen in silhouette against her reign
she stood a midst her pain
in front of her sun...
her only sun.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A new beginning. Happy New Year!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connor Whyte 01 January 2013

Beautifully written shows the true beauty of nature and of a woman, The way your portray this is as if the woman is a goddess of nature. Truly wonderful.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 January 2013

good poem. The moon half dead. thanks.

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