New Thoughts Ought Poem by me poet yeps poet

New Thoughts Ought

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Glad you all belong
to an old school of thought,
you scratch my back
I will his

'tis it

but modernization can't be ignored
salvation what
cut greed and pollution of mind
slice your egos
of a Banyan kind
and then yourself do remind

you are just a part of a solar system
now here soon no where
no kith or kin
you will ever find
even if you alone
have hope in a God
will be kind
to give you alone a second chance
you have the option of having mine

will be gracious of you
O part of present loving mankind
what salvation have you in mind,
is theory of the past

When many did not have a mind
looked towards heavens and stars
How clouds just passed
where rain came from so fast
they had a mind
but half mast.....

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: human brain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Belonging to an old school of thought is definitely interesting. Modernization no way can drag out the faith on God. Science and technology give comfort to us but true happiness comes form self realization and realization on God. Present loving mankind is also future loving mankind that shines with new hopes. Science describes the cycle of rain but from where rain comes and who has created this does not satisfactorily answers. This takes us in to deep thought. Very finely drafted heart touching and thought provoking poem. Nice sharing...10

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

I agree with you sir.it is a lovely poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 December 2015

i only convey i don not preach all have their own say u too may ty tc gb u

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