Next In Line Poem by Ging Taping

Next In Line

Rating: 5.0


In this claim world called life..
We have different rule to portray..
Different duty to do with..
Big & small should be treasure..
Because we are just a passers by..
We are all next in line...

Saturday, September 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'This is for my
younger brother who passed away last January of this year..I know your watching from up above.I miss you bro!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 April 2015

ging, when I GET to the front of the line, i'm going to GET two hamburgers (hold the pickle relish, please) , a large fries (with catsup) , a double thick strawberry milkshake (no straw, BUT a long-handled spoon would be nice) , and two slices of your apple pie (those are pretty small slices you have there!) . AND i might be back for dessert. bri :)

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 05 October 2014

A poem with sentiments of human thoughts and it is beautifully made and I liked the poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 September 2014

Big and small- treasure. good one.

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Donnie Wolff 27 September 2014

Simple and genius. Honestly, I really liked this.

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