Asif Baloch

Rookie (06-06-1978 / karachi)

Night, Nights Sleepless - Poem by Asif Baloch

Night, nights sleepless eyes wide
sleep comes as disguise
Thou you asked love to
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Comments about Night, Nights Sleepless by Asif Baloch

  • Rookie Inna Simeonova (8/26/2013 3:23:00 AM)

    I loved this poem! It depicts perfectly the disappointment a man faces. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (7/28/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    Simply divine writing Asif. The structure and flow of the poem is commendable. Alas, the last stanza completes the melancholy mood 'there was just a hope, on a peck of straw, also it burnt now ashes doth lies'. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gargi Saha (2/8/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    A lovely poem. U get 10++......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/8/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    Sleepless night...........in Asif's Romance Villas.Beautiful works! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (2/7/2009 1:48:00 AM)

    'sleep comes in disguise'
    'lend some happiness'
    Lines that are so power packed that touch the interiors of heart. Terrrific (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (2/1/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    waking or asleep
    Oh Asif tell me--
    how must death be deem
    things more true and deep
    than this mere mortal dream
    or how would thy notes flow
    in such a crystal stream
    a powerful write
    ++++10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tina Mackay (1/31/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful, very well crafted. I'd like to read more of your work. Kind Regards (Report) Reply








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