! ! ! Night When Avowes! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Night When Avowes! ! !

Rating: 2.9


As the deep youth of night avowes
by the sultry dream of the betiding sea
the ripples of wild stream rip through the awe
free and fancied thought over powers apprehension
outstretching in the room of worldly complex

the resurgence of snow from the frigid wall
tears of mirth gleans to the pond eternal
as the sun wishes its warmth to the earth
the shadow of blue rill through the bone

the myth happens to bristle by the mystery
over the murky meadow of the desire
the crystals of wisdom when wrought by the glory
the light still moves fastest across the waves
the soul seems to glow by gleams of passion

the nature glows ecstatic by the sizzling mist
smiles full moon inspires inkling the sea
brook flows streaming by the running rain
the whisper slowly half muffles from the veil

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 05 September 2008

wonderful! keep writing! I like the words, smiles full moon inspires inkling the sea.could you read and comment on my poems too? Thank you.

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Anjali Sinha 06 September 2008

frigid wall-murky meadow-sizzling mist nice phrases. thanks for sharing +10 as usual this goes to my fav list. regards anjali

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Shannon D Smith 08 September 2008

Hello my friend...That was a poem that makes you think...very very good and deep...I agree this is a +10! ! Keep up the good work! !

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Michaela Tatualla 08 January 2009

Another fantastic piece! ! ! keep inspiring!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 October 2008

phrases are astonishing indeed.....fine poem....eloquent.....10++

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Suyatha Kem 19 September 2008

Nice thought...good vocabulary...meaning not clear.

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Karen Kelley 16 September 2008

Vivid phrases, but hard to follow from thought to thought. Good verse.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 16 September 2008

Hi I am gretly inspired by this beautiful write of yours.You are indeed a great writer!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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