Nightmare Poem by Yasmin Khan

Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


Identities dissolved in the liquid darkness
Mists, unidentified faces lurked
Silent screams quivered on closed lips
And a multitude of unanswered
Questions.

Blots of light sailed in the drab atmosphere
Obscurity wove a hundred webs of fear
Each sinew got entangled, throbs between
Fear and bravery, occurred in
Oscillation.

Hands moved in search of light
Threads lost in murkiness
In paroxysm of pain, eyes rolled
Wildly back and forth in search of
Causation.

In subtle mix of reality and illusion
The brain was mesmerized
In myriad of phantom shadows
By dream reality, lost beyond
Discretion.

Truth became elusive
A scimitar suspended in the air
A star in the wee hours of morning
In the company of the orb of night rose to
Salvation.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
...partially real, partially poetic thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 29 June 2013

'To sleep perchance to dream', said Shakespear, 'what dream we do have'. Lovely poem Jasmeen

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

A contrast between illusion and reality, fear and bravery, light and murkiness..... we are thus eternally lost in a world of contradictions! A great write! !

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Farah Ilyas 29 June 2013

And this partially blend has a impact in abundance...bravo

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2013

The dream world is illusory, well described here.

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R.j. Wynn 01 July 2013

Some very poetic lines here. Love it

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Sallam Yassin 06 July 2013

Great and is enough sufficient to move the inner world of every soul in his action and images intense

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

when the night is a horse without a mare- it is always haunted and sleepless like those words.Well described and meaningful.

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Kevin Halls 02 July 2013

What a very descriptive poem Jasmeen. What a gift of words you have. First time I've come across your poetry, and I'll be back again!

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

excellent read. enjoyed much

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Wahab Abdul 02 July 2013

this is strikingly yours in different style which i like most... lovely..

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