Nightmare Poem by Naomi Waters

Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


A cage
Surrounded by flames
Only pain
Shadows surround
Darkness destroys
Not being able to escape
Time has no meaning anymore
Tears
Doubt
Wanting out
Chains trapping
Refusing to let go
Taunting you with freedom
A sound is heard
A name is called
Each time slowly getting louder
You learn it is your name
'Sam'
'Sam'
'Sammy'
Then the world shakes
You open your eyes
To see him shaking you calling your name
He stops
You assure him that you are alright
Besides it was just a nightmare
Of the cage
Of hell
Of 100 years in darkness and fire
It was just a nightmare

Monday, February 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,supernatural
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is about the supernatural character sam when he has a flashback of the cage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 March 2016

Good portrayal of nightmare: a shadow without substance yet an ugly reality which some people experience in their horrifying dreams. Lovely poem bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Rose.

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Naomi Waters 09 March 2016

wow i am so glad that you have read my poem and it makes mo so happy that you liked it also have ypu ever watched supernatural if you havent you should but you wont fully understand this poem until season 6

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Rajnish Manga 22 February 2016

Wow! It has all the suspense in it to sustain the interest of a reader till the end. There are times when life brings about such experiences. Thank you, Rose.

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Naomi Waters 23 February 2016

my favorite character is sam and i was so sad when lucifer possesed him and he jumped in the cage being locked in it for 1oo years surrounded by two angry angels

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Naomi Waters 23 February 2016

have you ever watched the show supernatural

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