No Fourth Wife! ...... [short; Personal; Oops! ; Secret No More] Poem by Bri Edwards

No Fourth Wife! ...... [short; Personal; Oops! ; Secret No More]

Rating: 4.2


A certain person, unknown,
has threatened to break bone....
or WORSE, if I do not 'admit'...
that I'm a fantasizing twit.

'NO fourth wife I've had! ',
or... so I've been told to say.
So, my friends, if 'she' asks,
just say 'Fourth wife? NO way! '

Wednesday, December 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lie
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
so you friends etc. on PH, if i ever mentioned having a fourth wife, you may now DISbelieve me. believe me! : ( bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

Dear Bri, when I read your message I was completely confused for 10 or 15 seconds then the subject of your message removed the confusion and now I read your new poem on your page. It's simply outstanding and I have no way but to rate it as 10.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

By the way my new poem is - Marriage and Honeymoon. May I expect a teacher's comment on it? It's memory of the past and I assure you I don't commit a blunder again and again.

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Lyn Paul 03 December 2014

So does that mean you have been married only 3 times and every day is a honey moon? Great humour.. keeps us all going. THANKS

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Words' Knight 14 December 2014

Sweet poem as usual. Like it. The poem depicts your sense of humor

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Beach Girl 12 December 2014

Bri, What a really cute poem and it made me laugh. Your wife sounds like a hoot too! I sent you a message but your mailbox seems to be broken. I wrote, Sorry, I'm easily confused. Where do I go to read the contest poems and cast my vote? Anyway, I'd like to vote for this one but don't know where.

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Savita Tyagi 04 December 2014

Great read. Fear of bones being broken keeps many out of trouble! Enjoyed the humor and wits. Thanks for sharing.

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Felicia Manning 04 December 2014

Your poems always have such great rhythm and a good flow. I have some catching up to do on PH I have not been on in awhile. Great poem though!

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Amitava Sur 04 December 2014

WOW' - Dear Bri - what a penning? with a message - what? Does it says... may be a little dating but never that marriage (more than one) ! ! ! Threat or fear of getting the bones broken you mentioned WORSE, ie, threat to break something else even ! ! ! ! Ha Ha Ha Ha........ Thank you for sharing.

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