Geetha Jayakumar

Silver Star - 7,536 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

No more Claims!


A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,

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  • Gold Star - 15,237 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/18/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    Nice emotional poem with great message of conviction and courage........Geetha........amazing write.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,142 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/15/2014 5:44:00 AM)

    Today nothing is left in her hands,
    With an empty hands….
    All she can pray for you and tell.....
    God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !
    A poem giving a message of firm determination. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Anish Chouhan (1/8/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Today nothing is left in her hands,
    With an empty hands…. superb (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,508 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/11/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    With empty hands….
    All she can pray for you
    Wishing well at the end. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (12/11/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    congratulations! this became a hot poem from India.. kudos.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/10/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    what is the use of building the dreams of castles in the planet, when one can build a beautiful shrine in their hearts to greet the friends and loved one? and the only path we need is, pure love..
    Anyway thank you for sharing your thoughts here.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,259 Points Soumita Sarkar (12/10/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    a good stroke of pen.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (12/10/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities.
    i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely.
    you are a talented gifted poet.
    i enjoyed this work so much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (12/8/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    A positive poem well enjoyed. Thank you! (and for your comments!) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,395 Points Kee Thampi (12/8/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    My dearest poetess again writes.........
    Wishing you all the best,
    on your beautiful come back
    To build a dream of castles.
    Once again in this beautiful planet dear! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (12/8/2013 2:36:00 AM)

    An excellent poem, really enjoyed it..... (Report) Reply



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