No One Knows Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
No One Knows
Sun is better or the warmth she blows?
Moon is better or the light she shows?
Breeze is better or the air it flows?
Scent is better or the thorns of rose?
Earth is better or the one who compose?
Heaven is better or the hope we repose?
Life is better or the living we pose?
Birth is better or death?
No one knows
(2008/11/11)
Great idea; well composed. But I doubt; should not the lines start as 'Is Sun better.........Is Moon better..........' like that. 10
Your rhymes add music to this lovely enigmatic piece.I agree with Tsira. Only God knows... Warmest regards, Sandra
what a beautiful well written piece this is...thank you for sharing it with me....
yes know one knows but we all have a choices to make it better or not. well penned my friend
Penetrating piercing questions posed perfectly, you’ll have me pondering for weeks over this beautiful poem.
lovely poem and puts light on the truth of life a. very honest questions you have asked. and the answrers to them are unknown to all. thanks for sharing.
One of your best in my opinion, good flow and as always very profound, 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Yes you correctly speak, only he one - the god knows the answer in all... 10... Tsira