No One There Poem by Melanie Walendowsky Baker

No One There

Rating: 5.0


dark thoughts that
no one shares
i look the same so
no one cares.

i try to hide from
fears with tears
but no one sees
and no one hears.

(London,15 January,2004)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 28 January 2009

Simply GREAT... well penned indeed

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John Smith 15 January 2009

Simply stunning. The lenght of the poem adds to the feel of no one there to care; very powerful. I will never be short of a screen name or status again!

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

This is very sad............: (....but its good. Like the emotion in it is sad..but the writing and phrasing is good...

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