No Perhaps Philosophy Poem by ahmed khaled

No Perhaps Philosophy

Rating: 4.5


perhaps..
when i sing..
i don't sing
when i dance..
i don't dance
but when i write
and when i love..
there's no perhaps
since, ..
when i write..
i do love,
when i love..
i do write,
and when i do 'both'
i do me
and when i do 'me'
i do..
no perhaps.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

writing gives me true joy too...poetry cures me.. I totally agree with you on this...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 November 2011

wow! you really, really wrote an amazing poem, , well expressed indeed, , love it!

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Abdallah Gamal 11 November 2011

Wow that's really great and inspiring! You played with the words very beautiful. Wow! It's really awesome. I can sing it, as usual my bro. you achieved at making a great work. Amazing one! :) *__^

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Crimson Love 11 November 2011

Amazing work as usual my friend, you bring a whole new meaning to Philosophy, exquisite poem! :)

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Dave Walker 11 November 2011

I think i see what your saying my friend. I would say love and writing go hand in hand. Writing clears the mind, to help you see what's Worth having in life, and love helps you live your life, with meaning and fulfilment. A great poem.

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Elke Seven 29 November 2011

Beautiful poem, but even love needs its rewards.

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Cristina Teodor 25 November 2011

A journey through your words labyrinth game, a twist of words with fine wise meaning. Great poem..Cristina Teodor

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Soulful Heart 24 November 2011

play of words letting out a mirage of feelings........defracting to emit so variant meanings...........liked how u used the same words to mean different each time...wow

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Eriobu Christabel 14 November 2011

NICE ONE U GOT THERE!

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Benjamin Paa Willie 13 November 2011

Bravo! Every line of this poem is my favourite line

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