hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,490 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Wrath In Love - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

No wrath dear in love
I have loved and believed
That shall never happen
Even all of sudden

Love has existed for centuries
But has never carried
A mistrust and dejection
It is simple inner reaction

It can never go wrong
Not even for song
It may sing popular wish
“We shall remain forever and finish”

I shall take it as gift
As there may never be the shift
In my attitude and temperament
I shall always be ready for commitment

Stay blessed wherever you are
By heart you shall never be far
I am and so may be in future
Yours lovely friend for ever

Never curse your dearest
It may not be called best
You were so loyal and close
He was your best one to be posed


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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2014 7:00:00 AM)

    Gibz Rising likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    Love poem

    AJ Edwards36 minutes ago
    Try to experiment with different rhyming couplets rather than always using the same formula.
    Comment 1 Comment+1

    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    ya, but that will not have soul in it. i did 5500 poem 5500 far all with different themes but with rhythms (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:55:00 PM)

    good beginning


    Nav Dugal2 minutes ago
    the ending isn't quite clear
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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:55:00 PM)

    Wow!

    Karen Habermehl2 minutes ago
    You Haven't lived long.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:54:00 PM)

    A little bit lost


    Blanca WoodyLess than a minute ago
    Perhaps it is the loneliness of a person left to carry on alone. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:54:00 PM)

    very good


    Hannibal Gwynplaine3 minutes ago
    creative
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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    No wrath dear in love
    I have loved and believed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, January 27, 2014


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