No Wrath In Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Wrath In Love

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No wrath dear in love
I have loved and believed
That shall never happen
Even all of sudden

Love has existed for centuries
But has never carried
A mistrust and dejection
It is simple inner reaction

It can never go wrong
Not even for song
It may sing popular wish
“We shall remain forever and finish”

I shall take it as gift
As there may never be the shift
In my attitude and temperament
I shall always be ready for commitment

Stay blessed wherever you are
By heart you shall never be far
I am and so may be in future
Yours lovely friend for ever

Never curse your dearest
It may not be called best
You were so loyal and close
He was your best one to be posed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

No wrath dear in love I have loved and believed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

very good Hannibal Gwynplaine3 minutes ago creative Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 January 2014

Gibz Rising likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Love poem AJ Edwards36 minutes ago Try to experiment with different rhyming couplets rather than always using the same formula. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago ya, but that will not have soul in it. i did 5500 poem 5500 far all with different themes but with rhythms

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

good beginning Nav Dugal2 minutes ago the ending isn't quite clear Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Wow! Karen Habermehl2 minutes ago You Haven't lived long....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

A little bit lost Blanca WoodyLess than a minute ago Perhaps it is the loneliness of a person left to carry on alone.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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