Non-Bloody Battle Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Non-Bloody Battle

Rating: 4.9


Target(1) .....Anger!
By swallowing a cup of hyper-cool ocean
I shall flood the furious soldiers of my whim!

Target(2) .....Greed!
By applying the latest anti-lust bomb
I shall destroy the mountain of greedy stones!

Target(3) .....Ignorance!
By sweeping with wisdom emotion
I shall remove the knotty webs of delusion!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunny Rose 06 September 2012

the world needs to hear your wonderful thoughts

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Stevie Taite 06 September 2012

I do enjoy little poems that are to the point in a twist of a metaphore! This is good!

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Walterrean Salley 06 September 2012

A very clever write. And if followed to the tee, would produce victory in this, such Non-Bloody Battle.

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Richard Jarboe 06 September 2012

I like your poem. Keep looking for more targets, ric

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So Close 12 September 2012

great work..! ! you pointed the most simple thing which can break anyone's heart having deep love...and i loved it! »so close«

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Alon Dy 09 September 2012

This is a beautiful poem! Anger, Greed and Ignorance. You point it out!

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Idris Elasha 07 September 2012

A battle written in blood without shedding blood.Hot, hot blood.

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Aung Si 06 September 2012

good style! Your targets are unquestionable.

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Aung Si 06 September 2012

good style! Your targets are unquestionable.

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