Nosey Neighbours Poem by suzan gumush

Nosey Neighbours

Rating: 5.0


While standing high up on a step ladder
Cutting my hedge with a pair of shears
A nosey neighbour stepped into my garden
I almost fell
When he startled me
Unexpectedly he appeared
From behind my well craft arch
Gossiping words I didn't want to hear
I continued with my duel
While he nattered away
Chatter chatter chatter
Half way down
Natter natter natter
Almost finished
Moan moan moan
I'm done
I turned and thanked him
For helping me get my hedge done
Still he continued to mutter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Van Allen 19 February 2008

Suzan, Is the good news that the shears, remained within your hands? B.V.A.

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Very nice. I can't pinpoint just what it was that held me but I saw something like creativity coming out of the mundane. Loved it. Ez

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 27 October 2006

I like this one Suzan... very cute!

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