Not Givin Up.... Poem by Dislocated Heart

Not Givin Up....

Rating: 5.0


I'm done fishing... fishing for someone new.
It was the first time, I could tell one person.. everything..
bout the past, good and even the bad..
she never judged.. except for the ppl on tv..
She got that cute little laugh.. that makes you laugh with her..
Most simple words.. can make ones day brighter..
didnt think it was possible..
till I met her..

She is more then perfect..
its her imperfections that make her worth everything in the world to me..
for that, I'm willing to wait..
some might say foolish of me...
but.. I'm not givin up that easily....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunset moonshine 06 February 2009

Never ever give up on what you want.... cause the first time you give up on something... it'll be the time you'll lose what you wanted.... so never give up... one day you will get what you want.... but sometimes you won't come close....LOL! ! !

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Catrina Heart 03 February 2009

Wow! What a fighting spirit you got...beautiful poem written in a eloquent and expressive words...Not giving up so easily....10/10

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