Not Long Ago Poem by Jahan Zeb

Not Long Ago

Rating: 4.8


Passed all the days of my spring
Back, my love can I never bring
Held me tightly to thine white breast
All day, all night, where I could rest
Time went by, I lost my charm
touch of the lips, my resting arm
Threw me away, like tree throws a leaf
Life in your arms was short and brief
Leave me not, when I need the most
Keep me in thine eyes, be my host

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 10 March 2013

Your intense longing to retrieve the lost love is beautifully expressed! A very emotive write! !

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Unwritten Soul 12 March 2013

Kiss on the rose, we may found love Of beauty and the smell lingers Just cant make it forever with us Because nothing is eternal... but the touch on your lips has been stained by the memory When you and a rose Kissed That forever will be In wandering soul_Soul

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Sahil Sood 27 April 2013

a lovely poem sir.. Reflecting perfect emotions of a man..

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 April 2013

A very fab poem dat can be related generally to any men. Kudos poet.

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Payal Parande 19 April 2013

in a way i kind of dislike you cause i don't like crying and you happens to do that every time with your spectacular poems...........i am speechless by this piece

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Vishal Sharma 23 March 2013

this poem conveys a very strange yet powerful message.....great write....so true and sophihistical poem, , thanks for sharing

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Persian Khushi 12 March 2013

dear poet, a raw yearning of emotions displayed...

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Malakand Pakistan
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