Not Proven Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Not Proven

Rating: 5.0


They tell me I will go to hell.
Condemned for all eternity.
I don’t believe the tales they tell.
The being who created me
gave me a brain which I can use
to choose which pathway I should take
what I accept or I refuse.
The choice is mine alone to make
No man can tell me what to do
to save my soul: They do not know
what they believe may not be true.
They have no proof which they can show.
to convince me that they are correct...
They think I’m foolish I expect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Thorkild Ellison 18 November 2007

This really strikes a cord. I like it (and others by you that I've read) . Best wishes

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Love Poetry Hate Racism 18 November 2007

10 as i am completely with you, , , if we cant live humanly and nobly here, in the here after our kind would corrupt heaven too...rape all the angels.. this is the true nature of primal man.. lord of the rings..

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

ivor or ivor.e hogg

Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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