Not Settled So Far Poem by sekharan pookkat
Not Settled So Far
Eyes closed in delight
Mind opened in doubt
Debt settled in past
Fragrance spread in galore.
Garland danced
Among bushes
Heart gazed for
Gentry touch.
Emotions converged into fury
And the poet shouted with gun
Where is he?
He has gone at last.
He was at her sight
Sat aside her right
Right below her knee
Not settled so far.
A lovely poem I enjoyed reading. I invite you now to read some of mine.
I am just speechless.A vivid pen-picture.It's like Joydev's Geetgobindam- - - Dehi podo-pallava-mudaram! But not settled, because, there's confusion, dubiousness.Fab.10+++++
Wow! Not sure what's going on in this poem Sekharan, but it's awesome! Poets shouting with guns, sounds a little scary lol.
He was at her sight Sat aside her right Right below her knee Not settled so far... i like! ! ! :)
brilliant poem or should i say a perfect wholesome story with nothing left to disappoint....bravo sir
settling scores an be tricky watch that gun it might go off. trick lines makes the poem interesting
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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It seems scores not yet settled, that too a poet shouted with as powerful as gun. Very beautiful poem.Loved reading it.