jahanvi .......................


Nothing At All - Poem by jahanvi .......................

i gave my world
i gave my life
but got in return
nothing at all

i gave up my dreams
i gave my hope
in wish to get bunch og joys for others
but got in return
nothing at all

i gave my desire
from the one i got inspired
i gave up my laugh
to wipe tears from other's lives
but got in return
nothing at all

i gave myself
to get changed for others
i gave my destiny to achieve identity desired by others
but got in return
nothing at all

i struggled whole my life
jst to bring joy in others life
but those 'others never realized and
got in return
nothing at all


Comments about Nothing At All by jahanvi .......................

  • Rookie Gaurang Sevak (8/17/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    amazing........really very nice.n its always happens to me like in dis poem.......thanx for this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Pia Crawford (7/5/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    I really like it. I'm able to relate to this and i like how you used repitition to add effect. It has a really nice flow to it, i enjoyed reading this (: (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/1/2009 2:03:00 PM)

    Very true. It keeps happening, when the surprises stop. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Viji Cool (7/1/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    Nice one yaar
    keep goin on dear (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 30, 2011


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