Nothing To Excite Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nothing To Excite

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I sat near her bed
To hear her words and be led
She was almost for forty years
With me and made me fearless

Even though we faced poverty
But thank we overcame with the grace from almighty
Today she is happiest woman
Truly contended and happy human

I see happy lines on her face
We were never let down in critical phase
She stood by me like rock
Life was made even joke

It was pure affection
That provided protection
With no more confusion
Or burning questions

She was homely and trustworthy
I was impressed so much already
We were happy family along with children
It was not a family alone but living heaven

There was nothing to excite
No more struggle and fight out
The harvest has been enough
Now we have time to laugh

She has her lion’s share
Almost praise worthy and fair
She has done enough for all of trust
With betraying cause and insisted as must

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

nice Billy NdegwahLess than a minute ago sweet Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Passionate Justin KelberLess than a minute ago Very deep and passionate. I just could't get past by some lack of rhyming scheme and solid wording but I got the message loud and clear none the less.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

I sat near her bed To hear her words and be led

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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