hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 30,345 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Nothing to fight Poem by hasmukh amathalal


Nothing to fight
Under naked night
It is much to delight
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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM)

    doesnt suond untrue


    someone noone4 minutes ago
    sounds in view
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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM)

    It's a good poem but it could be improved


    Ella Mae2 minutes ago
    I think it's a good poem, however I think you need to create more imagery and make the poem flow a little more. The rhyming seems like you have tried to base the whole line on the word, which doesn't make the poem flow as easily. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    Nothing to fight
    Under naked night (Report) Reply

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