Now Your Gone Poem by alexus jones

Now Your Gone

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A heart is torn open,
A love is broken,
A life is empty,
With few words spoken.

The words are spoken,
Are what I appear?
Like the loss of your love,
Is the blank I fear?

Knowing you hate me,
Is a terrible fate?
I thought the there was hope,
But it was too late.

What is spoken is spoken,
And what is done is done,
I spoke without thinking,
And know you are gone.

I hope one day that I will
Earn your heart back
Because I still truly love you
And that us a fact.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 01 February 2013

The thoughts in this one are good and carried well, but you must check the spelling. Attention to spelling is important. Adeline

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 26 September 2012

Love, is a nice topic, it will come with different things those just make it complete Love will come with betray, a broken heart and hate....but i deny my assumptions here. Love is the thing that will remain in our heart A great work well done.

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