I have no problem understanding
The concept of being numberless to you,
You can forget me,
But I'm still around.
I did not disappear
From the world you filled
For me.
I have...
The same giggle
The same remorse.
I have not changed
From the day you thought
Me perfect.
And yet....
You are gone.
© 2012
Don't really know what to write. Love to know where this one came from! Very powerful little write!
Ah no dis is bittersweet, ofcourse evryone remains d same yet ingrates end up takin them forgranted. Very very nice poem dat made me sigh.
LOVE this one. Get out of my head. Or stay, because that's what good writers do. Express relatable thoughts very well. Thanks for sharing. I did not disappear From the world you filled For me. I have not changed From the day you thought Me perfect. Those are my favorite lines.
I hope in times to come you will get to meet your friend soon.Splendid write so touching!
Loved the way you talked about the separation, the fruitless longing….
Passions boil... passions cool... good expression, though sad... Terry
In a few lines, you have depicted the unexpected cooling down of a warm relationship! Your stoic acceptance of it makes the poem specially charming! Thanks for this great share! !
I loved this fantastic poem and can relate to it perfectly right at the moment...unfortunately.....but, as we know, life goes on, and we do too. Thanks for putting my emotions into words here. Excellent!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful sorrow. Love the last 5 lines.