Numbers.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Numbers..

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Numbers are cruel,
When the heart beats ninety per minute,
when pressure is, down very down,
High very high, fluctuating.

Numbers are cruel,
when wearing spectacles,
power can not be adjusted,
must buy a new pair.

Numbers are cruel,
when using Glucometer,
higher the reading,
must control the eating.

Numbers are cruel,
when one has thousand,
sometimes in negatives and
the other has millions.

Numbers are cruel,
when one is young and fresh,
and the other is old and in mess,
bigger the number, wiser.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanniappan Kanniappan 19 February 2012

Dear Veeralakshmi, Your poem 'Numbers..' is good. Sometimes numbers are encouraging, sometimes discouraging really. V.K.Kanniappan

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Rajendran Muthiah 19 February 2012

Apt title. Interesting Content covering the serious and jovial things in life.

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Raj Arumugam 18 February 2012

good humor and clever way of looking at numbers in various contexts...makes for interesting reading

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