Observations From A Distance Poem by Thomas Bates

Observations From A Distance



I watched
her,
warm sun reflecting
against her soft American hair
brushed to the side, sweetly swept
enhancing a face of obscurity
and unseen hand of precious care
that held lightly to my heart.

my pupils cause some wonderment in others,
psychiatrists of the face,
the donut shop people and pharmacy 'look-arounds, ' really
just about anyone who looks
close enough into my eyes
(and too many do, it seems, sometimes)
and seeing how large they actually are.
they must wonder if I am on drugs, at any moment
but
I'm honestly there,
and
aware, just having slightly changed.

changes, changes,
and the change that came unexpectedly,
vague as a wagon's lantern
shining from beyond a road's path
that turns some minutes ahead into the gloom, to
fight against the darkness.

by Thomasjbates

Tuesday, July 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
F J Thomas 30 July 2014

Tell me please Thomas, was it her beauty that caught your eye or had you notice changes that no one else yet had?

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Thomas Bates 27 February 2016

changes, I believe. she was/is a mystery

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