Observations On Winter. Poem by Peter Vealey

Observations On Winter.

Rating: 5.0


White ringed shoes, scuffed n' broken.
Telephone farces.
Find five pence, lose fifteen on,
A crossed line.
Winter's easterly wind,
Will take its toll by January.
On old folk, feet, and hands.
On animals alike.
And another year,
Is only a twelve-month forgotten lesson,
Of how cruel she can be.
Slithering n' sliding.
Like a baby on first steps.
Red noses, pale faces.
Are always the same,
This time of year.
Full of cold n' woe.
Snowballs n' Christmases,
Come and soon pass.
Melted by memories dream of reality.
Of faces grey n' aglow.
While nothing's ever learned,
Only that on the roundabouts,
You swing,
While on the swings (of life) ,
You lose to gain a loss.
Cliches and cliches.
And never a good old buddy insight.
To chew the cud,
To relive the stud.
Shake n' clear off the mud.
Of indifferent lives n' years.
Observations of winter.
Indoor stubble, damp washing muddle.
See your air pollute the sky.
Lose your nerve of chasing romance
And pure, pure love.

Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillian M Hart 15 August 2020

This poem is very visual. Reading it, one can clearly picture a cold winter's day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Mind is totally melted by memories dream of reality. Very wonderful composition is shared on really. Interesting.10

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