Obstacles Poem by shiny shine

Obstacles

Rating: 5.0


Life throws obstacles at everyone
Not mattering if its death, divorce or arguments
There is always a situation that makes you stop and think
At that point many people attempt to change who they are
While some people may for the better others go through stages of grief and depression
At this point I believe friends are the necessary help and support
During a time which can either make or break a friendship
Some friendships aren’t strong enough to face the stress
Others may become unbelievably strong
Knowing that no matter what someday there will be an obstacle in one of your life’s that
Challenges your friendship
Do not let it break you
For everyone out there do not judge people
Cuz you do not know what they are going through
What emotions they are holding in
Never take advantage of anyone
Instead unite together as one
As long as you have hope nothing can go wrong
Live each day to the fullest
For you never know what the next day will bring

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

That poem is so true. You are really smart in being able to speak with such honesty and thoughtfullness. My favorite line is 'At this point I believe friends are the necessary help and support'. Thanks for being my friend.

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Sarah Marie 06 March 2010

I absolutley love this poem. You are a great writer and your poems are amazing. Great work!

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Zack Burton 06 March 2010

Very true, very frank, and very generic. Good work, but I like I REMEMBER better.

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Adam Reed 06 March 2010

not bad senorita. pretty insightful too ju should take up psychology :)

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Ryan Thompson 11 January 2010

this is very true and it made me think about my friend and me

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J.M. Berger 11 January 2010

I like this a lot and this is such a good mindset to have

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