Obsticles In Life Poem by jonathan hicks

Obsticles In Life



When your having a great day can it turn sour?
Could there be an obsticle coming your way and you least expect it?
But when i comes its like a storm.
What do you do in these times.
Me i look to God for refuge a place of comfort where i can wait outside the storm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colton Hicks 06 June 2008

Nice job, your getting better. I would suggest some corrections in spelling and to capitalize some of your words.

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