Obvious Motivations Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Obvious Motivations

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People who complain,
About life and what it is not...
Often are disappointed,
They can not use others
To obtain an advantage,
That highlights a disadvantage!
Attracting an attention,
To their lack of prevention curtailed.
They can not see this...
As they look for others to agree with them.
That's how obvious their motivations are.
Provoking hollow goals,
With empty wishes to achieve
Absolutely nothing for themselves...
Or anyone else that sympathizes,
Within listening distance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronald Stroman 04 June 2007

i was motivated, and it was obvious to me, that i was going to get a good 'fix' of poetry, which i did. take care.

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