Veronica Centeno

Rookie - 196 Points (September 17 / Cyde NewYork)

Ocean Blue - Poem by Veronica Centeno

Put all of your feelings in a bottle
Throw it in the ocean and
Watch it sail away
In the ocean blue
And watch all your problems just float away
And when the storm didn't blow her away, she adjusted her sails

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings, lifestyle, ocean

Comments about Ocean Blue by Veronica Centeno

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (8/17/2015 6:57:00 PM)

    I liked this a lot, until I got to the very last line, and then it didn't seem to fit. For me, this works better as a five-line poem (without that last line) .
    One other thing, there is a typo in the second line.
    Shouldn't that be
    Throw it in the ocean...
    ? (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,494 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/29/2015 10:08:00 AM)

    A nice idea, liked it............................. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 780 Points Aranthabailu Ummar (7/29/2015 9:59:00 AM)

    Eventhou it shows a small prose it have big solution to our problems
    sea do not know what we have filled in it. But it carries all in a same manner
    So you are the great to show that all the problems can handle easily (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, August 17, 2015

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