Ocean Of Stars Poem by Tyler Smith
Ocean Of Stars
As I drift through space alone,
I hear a man yell over the radio,
“It'll be ok! ”
I click the radio off,
Because I know better.
I sigh contently and twist my body slightly
To try and capture this panorama of beauty
In my last minutes.
This is what I have been waiting
My whole life for.
The luminescent sun flares brilliantly,
And the lambent stars glow
Three times as effulgent
Than they ever will
On the clearest, most perfect night.
I start to form constellations in my head.
I even create one of you.
I hear a beep,
And a woman’s robotic
Voice say “low oxygen.”
I don’t care. My only regret
Is that you aren't here
With me. My tears start
To stream down my face
As I remember you.
I am so alone.
But now, in this ocean of stars,
I will be with you forever.
oh my lands! TYLER! i love LoVe LOVE it! ...and you know i'm not just being nice. i'm not 'just nice' haha
This poem makes me feel very at ease and it gives you a sense of one of the melting clock paintings. I really do like the poem...The hands part is my favorite part. There is commented! ! ! ! ! ! !
I really do love this poem. the language is simple and to the point. yes tyler the language is simple :) I wouldn't change a thing. Altogether a beautiful poem
WOW..This is soooooooooo GOOD! no, the word 'good' doesn't suffice, its incredible!
Dear Tyler I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the idea and how you wrote it.
....... who knew u were so deep? i love it alot. poems aren't so bad after all huh? trying to think of an amazingly long n giant word to describe ur writing is difficult, but i did like it very much. cant wait to read more.
OK! This is really amazing, yet very sad. But I love it anyway, it makes me think! Great job! !
Hey. I really liked, I love the scenery of the plot. I would never have thought about it. It`s a great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Whoo-wee! ! ! ! ! Think it's long enough? ? ? Check out first stanza: 'repelled' that means to go away. The man came on the radio as if expecting a panamoniom to break out. Slow down, mo-jo! ! ! A lot of big words is terrible on my petite (center of invertebrate nervous system) brain. lol Big words make me think; we're SENIORS we shouldn't be made to think! ! ! ! ........................wow........................you killed him. Not a bad idea. Take the easy road out, don't have to worry about him, but now you made a mistake. The reader is now thinking about the girl. What's up with her? Did she die? Did she divorce/broke up with him? ? ? Sheesh! ! ! ! Forever is just too long of a time, make it an eternity and it's longer ^.^ lol