October Poem by Brinley steed

October



October is my favorite time because of all the scare,
I have some time to go trick-or-treating with some time to spare.
When, I'm outside I might see some bats,
I could even see a cat.
You could go find some pumpkins,
And you'll probably see a bumpkin.
This is my favorite time,
Because I get to rhyme.

Thursday, October 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Halloween
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 16 October 2014

Excellent beginning, keep on writing poems

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Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

the superficial innocence of the poem is impressive. successfully established the intended passion and message at its wonderful economy though. wonderful. truth's gleam keeps emitting around. pure exchange of admittance. keep penning. please see if you can review my latest two posts thanx and rgds.

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