Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,248 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Ode To A Lost Love - Poem by Valerie Dohren

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'Oh sweet breath of eternal life
Dance ever `pon her silent breast
Released from pain and worldly strife
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Comments about Ode To A Lost Love by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/24/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    Congratulation Valerie nice poem as an ode thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 1,379 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/19/2015 12:32:00 PM)

    What a tragedy that cuts short a young life! A beautiful piece nonetheless. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,871 Points John Richter (1/7/2015 7:18:00 AM)

    At long last, my kindred spirit found.....
    for such words as these, poetry dance!
    With mine heart whisked away,
    as my tongue quakes to say:
    such saddened feel, this lost romance!

    Intensely beautiful. So glad to have found you Valerie. For so long I have felt alone in the world of classical poetry. I must agree with Achill below - this is certainly a masterpiece..... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,757 Points Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:51:00 AM)

    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,757 Points Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:50:00 AM)

    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,179 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,179 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,179 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (9/28/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    This is a masterpiece. I had a tear in my eye reading this Valerie. My sister died when she was nineteen, we were very close. This poem brought the memories I have of her back, so vividly. Wish I could write this well. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,947 Points Abekah Emmanuel (8/24/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Indeed all too soon we loose our loved ones. how sad life is sometimes! How soon our lives fade away like smoke ascends and vanishes into the heavens.....very sad but beautiful poem...once again.....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,676 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/19/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    beautifully sad to say good bye to someone so young..lovely rhyme.. keep up the good work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    it is so impressive. bravo Valerie Dohren. i am proud of you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,757 Points Patricia Grantham (7/16/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    A very stirring and moving write Valerie. I always love reading your works.
    They really touch the heart and soul. Trying to keep from crying! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/25/2014 5:59:00 PM)

    Well Valerie, I had to vote this one a ten and add to my favorites list before making it to the comments box! This poem in my eyes is simply utter perfection. So beautifully written. And that last verse? Oh! Those first two lines in the last stanza are brilliant! And then you close it with that sad but brutal fact that this kiss is his last goodbye. The vivid descriptiveness through the who, e poem just evokes such a moving and soul stirring picture! Love this, love this, love this! Did I tell you that I love this? Lol. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,212 Points Tony Karas (3/2/2014 12:26:00 PM)

    An excellent write! Brought tears to my eyes. I would give it a 20 if allowed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,503 Points Elena Sandu (2/24/2014 11:55:00 PM)

    Sigh. Valerie, you wrote so beautifully of a dreadful time that instead of running away have found me sitting at her bedside, tears united on my chins would slide down of my neck to stop with a splash on the feet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 373 Points Stephen W (2/24/2014 9:44:00 PM)

    Very beautiful and moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,634 Points Savita Tyagi (2/24/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    A very tender and heart touching poem. Sad as it is to say goodbye this poem leaves a lasting impression upon heart. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Paul Fowler (2/24/2014 6:33:00 PM)

    Valerie this is a superb poem! Excellently written; very classic style and very touching (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,751 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/24/2014 12:32:00 PM)

    A tender touching tribute that is therapeutic. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply










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