Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,509 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Ode To A Lost Love - Poem by Valerie Dohren

'Oh sweet breath of eternal life
Dance ever `pon her silent breast
Released from pain and worldly strife
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Comments about Ode To A Lost Love by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 199 Points Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah (4/26/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    full of emotions.....
    sad but beautifully expressed...death is inevitable but most a times it takes awy those we least expect...hmmmm...never too late to share in your loss... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/24/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    Congratulation Valerie nice poem as an ode thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,381 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/19/2015 12:32:00 PM)

    What a tragedy that cuts short a young life! A beautiful piece nonetheless. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,678 Points John Richter (1/7/2015 7:18:00 AM)

    At long last, my kindred spirit found.....
    for such words as these, poetry dance!
    With mine heart whisked away,
    as my tongue quakes to say:
    such saddened feel, this lost romance!

    Intensely beautiful. So glad to have found you Valerie. For so long I have felt alone in the world of classical poetry. I must agree with Achill below - this is certainly a masterpiece..... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:51:00 AM)

    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:50:00 AM)

    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,606 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,606 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,606 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (9/28/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    This is a masterpiece. I had a tear in my eye reading this Valerie. My sister died when she was nineteen, we were very close. This poem brought the memories I have of her back, so vividly. Wish I could write this well. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,959 Points Abekah Emmanuel (8/24/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Indeed all too soon we loose our loved ones. how sad life is sometimes! How soon our lives fade away like smoke ascends and vanishes into the heavens.....very sad but beautiful poem...once again.....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,686 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/19/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    beautifully sad to say good bye to someone so young..lovely rhyme.. keep up the good work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    it is so impressive. bravo Valerie Dohren. i am proud of you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (7/16/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    A very stirring and moving write Valerie. I always love reading your works.
    They really touch the heart and soul. Trying to keep from crying! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/25/2014 5:59:00 PM)

    Well Valerie, I had to vote this one a ten and add to my favorites list before making it to the comments box! This poem in my eyes is simply utter perfection. So beautifully written. And that last verse? Oh! Those first two lines in the last stanza are brilliant! And then you close it with that sad but brutal fact that this kiss is his last goodbye. The vivid descriptiveness through the who, e poem just evokes such a moving and soul stirring picture! Love this, love this, love this! Did I tell you that I love this? Lol. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,368 Points Tony Karas (3/2/2014 12:26:00 PM)

    An excellent write! Brought tears to my eyes. I would give it a 20 if allowed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,791 Points Elena Sandu (2/24/2014 11:55:00 PM)

    Sigh. Valerie, you wrote so beautifully of a dreadful time that instead of running away have found me sitting at her bedside, tears united on my chins would slide down of my neck to stop with a splash on the feet. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 514 Points Stephen W (2/24/2014 9:44:00 PM)

    Very beautiful and moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,016 Points Savita Tyagi (2/24/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    A very tender and heart touching poem. Sad as it is to say goodbye this poem leaves a lasting impression upon heart. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Paul Fowler (2/24/2014 6:33:00 PM)

    Valerie this is a superb poem! Excellently written; very classic style and very touching (Report) Reply










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