Ode To A Solitary Mind - 3 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Ode To A Solitary Mind - 3

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</>Quite troubled one lifts eyebrows
Upon a crow and a stone he throws
To drive the crow far away
So the trouble he can sway
And can control his irritation
Against troublesome voice of crow.
He thinks then of melodious voice
Of a nightingale or a skylark.
You too leave the solitude dark,
Oh dear mind to sing carols.

Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

An impressive write on irritated mind so nicely and touchingly executed. Beautiful poem.

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Valsa George 15 April 2016

When in trouble, we release our irritation through some impulsive act. Instead of allowing our mind to be disturbed, imagine something pleasurable, perhaps a sweet song by a bird might change our mental state from disturbance to sheer joy. Nature always offers a pleasing solution. A fine poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

To drive the crow far away! Nice piece of work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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