Rohan Roy

Rookie (03-07-1992 / Kolkata)

Ode To An Unknown Friend - Poem by Rohan Roy

You dont show it always
but I know that you care.

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Comments about Ode To An Unknown Friend by Rohan Roy

  • Rookie - 1 Points Michael Parsons (3/2/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    This poet has yet to master his craft; juvenilia at best. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 103 Points Sankaran Ayya (2/28/2012 11:01:00 AM)

    Very nice friendly lines

    The more I get to know you
    The more I know my self
    An open invitation to all unknown friends Now it is me I think. Good poem.ROHAN
    -KAVIN CHARALAN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 344 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/28/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    your poem is fascinating for me. it remembered me a story about Guardian-Angels)))) Unknown Friend - is a spirit by you, he smiles when you are happy and cries when sadness comes into your soul... I like the poem, it has good meaning and nice way of writing. keep it up. future belongs to you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jacob Clark (2/25/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. Though, there are some tense issues present (I suppose they could be in there on purpose) . The repetition coupled with the short, two-line stanzas give the poem an almost childish demeanor - very reminiscent of Dr. Seuss. Perhaps it is the message that is seussical, as well. Overall, the poem works and is well written. The only problem I had with it is the last line, and it's not really a problem, per se. The word 'gonna' just feels so out of place with the rest of the diction choices. When I read the line it stopped me. I haven't decided if it was a good or bad stop. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Suja Nair (12/3/2010 11:04:00 AM)

    I love this one, very nice, write more rohan you are good (Report) Reply








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