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Ode To Gardners by Carolyn Brunelle

 11/23/2008 3:19:50 AM
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Carolyn Brunelle
(December 1946)
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Ode To Gardners
 
  Plants and flowers,
Shrubs and trees
Warmed by the sunshine,
Kissed by the bees.

Ever growin .........
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Carolyn Brunelle

 
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Michael Pruchnicki (4/2/2008 2:31:00 PM)
Carolyn - nice work on Ode to Gardeners!

One suggestion - use the active instead of passive voice

Dropping us faithfully
To our knees.................passive

We dropp faithfully
To our knees................active

Just a thought! Usually the active indicates action, doing something
Perhaps though you are overcome by the breeze and brought to your
knees by its emotional power?

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