(January,1995 / New Port Richey, Florida)

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Ode To My First Love

You are my sky above
and my Earth below.

A frown will never obscure
my face when you are near.

Your footsteps are in sync
with the beat of my heart.

Your deep brown eyes
make me melt, and your lips
taunt me.

Your voice is the most
sonorous sound ever uttered
in all of history.

You leave me smitten
with every glance you
throw at me.

You are my heart and soul.
You are my first love.

And the secrecy of my undying
love for you makes it all
worth while.

Submitted: Thursday, April 08, 2010


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  • Afzal Shauq (4/12/2010 12:59:00 PM)

    lovely poem..fantsatic even

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  • Shirow Walker (4/8/2010 11:34:00 PM)

    Nice, I like it. Can relate.

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