Ode To Pirate Sun, Sea, Wind And Rain Poem by Captain Cur

Ode To Pirate Sun, Sea, Wind And Rain

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Pleasant intermittent rhythms
voiceless smiles that transverse space
sunlight plays in raindrop prisms
each one falls to intrigue my face.
Sweet swipes my tongue's long liquid taste
across parched lips of cooling thirst
pool in cloud's white veils misty lace
where each drop claims to bathe me first
naked to the wind singing odes to sea and earth.

Flower of the deep sea blossom;
Poseidonia and Mangrove,
blue light filters tall seagrass hums
beneath your waves throughout your coves
rhizome fills your lush treasure troves.
Aquamarina fruited leaves
dress orange red reefed coral droves
twines up coifs cliff side rising eaves;
the budding mermaid's dirge alluring as she grieves.

Slight ripples streak your polished glass
preambles rouse your dozing waves
still my sails stationary mast
upon your paused symphonic staves.
Orchestral banded wind invades
the restless beauty of your lake
each fluted note and horn pervades
the shores and landlines you will break
with tidal drums as mankind trembles in your wake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 10 July 2013

Oh Captain, my Captain! This write bought a rush of adrenaline. Through your description of the elements and nature you took me to a place of complete relaxation in your poem. Written with beauty, rhyme and rhythm. Loved it.

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David Wood 01 June 2013

Very good rhyme & rythem. I loke this one very much.

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2013

Ohhh Captain, you melt evening colors to fill in reader's heart...so we can feel all things, glad i am your crew so i can experienced this myself my captain _Soul

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Shahzia Batool 27 May 2013

imagination + observation + lexicon = your painting! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 26 May 2013

Oh! What a beautiful poem describing the Sea Wind and Rain and the verses are alluring ! I read and re-read to completely comprehend the loveliness ! Thanks for sharing, Captain!

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