Of Rainy Seasons Poem by Jonzo Bandwagoner

Of Rainy Seasons

Rating: 5.0


The dribbling sheets
Touch in noiseless triumph:
Trapped, we crowd
In the house's amber, artificial light,

Forced to eat oatmeal.
The porch provides adequate
Coverage-more than
Fair eyes can find to fetch-

I doubt whether I will
Catch cold without scarf-
The bed will suffice;
Ploughed air returns to lungs.

'I doubt whether
The house will remain
If the rain
Keeps up like this, '

The first line of my book
Reads. Well now! In bed
I laugh. On the second page,
I'll find out the hero eats

crumb cake coffee instead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jonzo. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Landrey 25 March 2008

definitely strong poem. very likable. the best part is undoubtedly 'remain' and 'rain' powerful assonance. -landrey

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