David DeSantis

Rookie (01/29/85 / Utica, NY)

Office Work


Work, work, work..

sitting effort,
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  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (4/30/2008 6:43:00 AM)

    I was about to dedicate a poem to the office work, but you already did it in your unique eloquent manner (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (4/28/2008 8:29:00 AM)

    A train of thought that escapes the confines of the office before being briefly halted by a burst of 'work work work' - the repitition of which contrasts with the superb imagery of the daydreams that interject the monotony. 'pitch fork eyes' - is just one image that leapt from the page. So glad I escaped office life when I did! A superb write David. j x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (4/22/2008 11:19:00 AM)

    and now you've found the secret to staying sane; poetry on the sly! -c (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Flora Gillingham (4/10/2008 5:02:00 PM)

    Only 40 years to go! But at least it will soon be the weekend! Nice poem.

    F (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points David Harris (4/7/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    David, do I know what you mean. It can be a bit soul destroying at times and you wish you were somewhere else. Top marks and thanks for reminding me my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Vonda Overlie (4/3/2008 1:17:00 PM)

    I love your thought patterns... you mkae me think deep! Glorious! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Campbell (4/3/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    the repetition is a great idea. dull and bleh. love the last bit. (Report) Reply

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