Often Insulted Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Often Insulted

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Darkness may deepen
Attacks may sharpen
You will be surrounded
Often insulted and offended

Beware of your thoughts
You have already fought
Now it has been sought for
The way to divinity and never to be caught

You are pakizaah*
When I utter Allah
The body can't have shadow
You have all the way to grow

Water may be deep
But to offer your own reflection
Just to show your real action
As what you are with any reaction

* Pakizaah.. Sacred... Holy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

Darkness may deepen Attacks may sharpen

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

Teresa Mahieu2 hours ago I did not really get the meaning of this poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

Xavier Paolo Josh Ledesma Mandreza2 hours ago I didn't know it could be that Sublime... Comment +1 not sure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2012

Masy P2 hours ago very nice Comment +1 WOW.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2013

i am only nine and i made it up my self i hope you liked it Samanthadawn Daniels1 hour ago will who ever likes it be my friend on facebook. Comment 1 Comment+1 Nicely...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2013

Josh Mathews1 hour ago Kind of negative. Its really deep, but so negative. Comment 2 Comments+1 Interesting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2013

Tsepo Manda1 hour ago Agreed Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2013

Chris Dejoseph1 hour ago Good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2013

Re: Often insulted (Score: 1) by graphitegirl on Tuesday, September 11,2012 (23: 36: 19) I think the line beware of your thoughts is an interesting line. The poem is interesting at well. I get this persecuted feel from it. Your comments on your poem are also interesting. Great meter in your poem and you do have style.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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