Oh, Father! - Feel My Untold Love! (Part-1) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Oh, Father! - Feel My Untold Love! (Part-1)

Rating: 4.8


At schooltime, my father left me at house gringo!
Yet I Kept my tender heart at home of lingo!
When I quested, for fate “he is right as rain.”
Tender tears exploded like MISSILES yet in vein;
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

While I missed mother’s love and father’s stories
All the night I stood without sleep with many worries
I asked the god, why two legs and hands!
Why not two bodies and two souls for errands!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

Sugarcane Juice, peanuts and berries!
Our green fields, summer holidays and holy tours!
When thousand memories flashes in mind, now,
How much I miss mom's care! How much I miss dad’s love!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

The small buns you bought for me still smell good,
The grapes brought, coming from city is still my favorite food;
The fruits you brought me with roots; are they heaven sent?
Yet I didn’t pay any rent pay as you are my parent!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

Do you know who my MAHATMA is? Oh, my brother!
He is not Mandela, nor Gandhi but my father
Who taught me A to Z rather?
What to do and what not to do, I gather!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

When I think of all the things you gave to me:
Your sacrifices in food; love and affection are some to name,
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*A big NOTICE BOARD: Oops! Sorry the poem is NOT completed. This is just break time! Now continue Your reading in part 2 the poem.

Oh, FATHER! - FEEL MY Untold LOVE! (Part-2) contin'd in part 2.. Read it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 27 November 2011

What a lovely poem from a son to his father. I'm sure your Dad must feel very proud of this, Harry. It is always the little things that we remember when we are feeling lost and alone! A special poem to a special person, I'm sure...

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

I'm grateful for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Vipins Puthooran 29 October 2011

Mother is our first God, father the next, , And we are blessed in their benediction.. What a soothing poem, , I love it! ! ! Great poesy/amazing poem... Top marks! ! ! 10+++

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a wonderful review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Allemagne Roßmann 06 September 2011

A to Z enjoyable and heart-freezing, heart-rending, heartful write.Hearty congratulations for you for this poem of valueing the ethics and the struggles faced while growing up and rememberin the true best friends one can eve have..well done

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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