Oh God Poem by joli ashley hernandez

Oh God



YOU GOT ME ON MY KNEES,
BEGGING GOD PLEASE,
TO SEND YOU BACK TO ME,
I COULDN'T EAT,
I COULDN'T SLEEP,
MADE ME FEEL LIKE I COULD NOT BREATH,
AND ALL I WANTED TO DO,
IS FEEL YOUR TOUCH,
AND GIVE YOU ALL OF MY LOVE,
YOU TOOK MY LOVE FOR GRANTED,
NOW I CAN'T HANDEL THIS OH GOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mitzi Albright 07 November 2007

Sounds violent, desparate, and confused. Simple and to the point leaves nothing for the reader to guess about. Need to send this to the inspiration!

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